Need Rough draft revised into Final draft. Attached are the instructors corrections to the first draft. His recommendations are, “Please go through it before submitting your final draft.
I would like to see more of the information you found in your lit search incorporated into the paper.” Below are the references to add data that supports my research topic that needs to be incorporated into the literature review.
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